Feedback

Last week we received feedback from our presentation. majority of the feedback was positive and for the negative feedback our problems were. the narrative was a bit confusing and this was probably due to the fact that one character had two personalities and i think that is what made it confusing. Another problem/negative that we had that linked to the first problem however it could also be a possible solution is that we need to simplify or create a background story to the narrative. Th e final problem was that we needed to think about channeling our crime drama to an audience the final feedback made a lot of sense however we did have an audience but we did not have enough time to mention it in our presentation. Personally i thought the feedback was a great way to improve and progress in making our crime drama better its also a good way to tie up the loose ends to our project.